Sunday 21 March 2010

the first chapter off my new book (in the dark shadows)(copy right)

"I ran throw the dark forest as the shadows of the day trend into the darkness off the night I cued see the shadows fallowing me there breath rasping then I ran into a clearing it was so cold I cued see my breath then I sore them amya rilly kitty Fay will and riff all from my class (well I’d only bin once because it was a try out because I was moving there in too days it’s a place called goldvill) they were smiling menacing and a shiver ran down my spine

Chapter one the new beginning

Hello my name is kitty maystone im 18 years old and live in a place called maysonevill well I did until 7 months ago so now I’ll tell you my story

I look’t at the massive great white shark as it used its powerful tale to push it past me and I also look’t at the swirls of aqua blue as they swam to the top of the tank and as the bubbles went to the bottom and settled then I felled a tug at my skirt I look’t down “sally what are you doing??” im scared said a little voice and I look’t down again"

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