its called in the dark shadows and is about this girl called kitty maystone who moves to a place in America called goldvill and she finds out that vampires live there and she falls in love with one of them called riff (hes the most hansom) got to go now xxxxxxxxxxxxx's to all my reads love Millie xx
That sounds really cool :) I can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteBut what you need to think about - trust me, I'm a vampiric writer - is how to make your vampires stand out and more unique. Twilight vampires sparkle in sunlight; Vampire diaries vampires have rings that stop them turning to dust in sunlight; Dracula vampires only die if attacked by a werewolf; My Immortal vampires have wings. What you need to do is ignore all these things and find something about your vampires that makes them individual and special and makes the reader walk away thinking ' Wow, that idea fits those vampires perfectly '.
Well done :) xx
thanks ive got a lot of idas
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